Let's be friends?

[Nimf]

We return from a commercail break to find new TWOstars lady Cari-Dee skipping happily through the backstage area. She passes Jason Bell stood talking to Portia and gives them both a wave, a cheeky grin and skips on. The Phoenix waves back instinctively. Portia glares at her partner then at the pink clad girl as she walks up to Darkstars office, slapping Jason on the chest as he watches her leave.

Portia: Get a grip.

Jason: I was only being polite!

Portia: Huh, yeah. Polite to her? Seriously? Have you seen what she looks like-Barbie doll... Why would they hire someone like her? This is a serious place, how can we women ever be taken seriously in this business with bubblegum girly girls wandering around?

Just as Cari is about to knock on the door of the boss, a hand appears and grabs her wrist. Whipping the surprised girl around, Portia is about to speak when Cari wraps her in a warm hug.

Cari: Hey, oh wow, you're so pretty!

Portia wriggles out of the hug and takes a step back.

Portia: What are you doing here?

Cari: Me? I'm just going to see the boss man, say hi, you know! I wanna make sure...

Portia gives the Bangor Beauty a small shove.

Portia: You know EXACTLY what I mean. What are you doing HERE? You don't belong here, this place is for REAL wrestlers, not silly little girls wanting to play at a womans game.

Cari is slightly taken aback by the aggressiveness but quickly shrugs it off.

Cari: Aww come on, there's no need to be mean! Let's be friends? I bet you could show me all around here and we could go for ice cream?

This time the shove is harder. Cari-Dee stumbles backwards and clatters into Darkstar's office door.

The door opens fairly quickly and Darkstar comes out to see Portia standing infront of the newbie, staring angrily.

Darkstar: *Shrugs*

Before Cari gets a chance to say anything to her new boss, he sighs and closes the door again.

Cari: Aww he went away! Where were we?

Cari-Dee turns to Portia and walks towards her slowly.

Cari: I'm sure we can sort this...

Cari is cut off by a slap to the face. Her hand rises quickly to her cheek in shock, before a second (and much harder slap) rocks her head backwards.

Portia: You don't belong here. You're not WANTED here. Go back to your pink bedroom and leave this to the professionals.

Cari slowly lowers her hand from her face and takes a step forward, looking down at the angry wrestler. In the background, we can see Jason watching intrigued.

Cari: That was not very nice.

Cari slaps Portia back, shocking both ladies.

Cari: Aww damn i'm sor...

Portia launches forward before Cari-Dee finishes her sentance. Slamming Cari backwards, Portia brings her knee up, winding the surprised girl. Cari pushes back, hard, sending Portia to the floor.

Jason starts to walk over to his partner before Portia shouts at him to stop, telling him she can handle her own business.

Cari, not wanting to fight, heads back to knock on the bosses door. Portia reaches forward catching her leg, tripping her into the door again.

Darkstar opens the door again, looks at both women sprawled on the floor and closes his door, muttering about nowhere being sacred.

Realising this won't end easily, Cari kicks out at Portia, connecting with her chin.

Cari: My bad. Just let me go! I don't want to fight you like this.

Portia grabs the leg that kicked her face, pulling Cari towards her and elbowing the girl hard in the face. Shocked and bleeding from the mouth, Cari pulls herself upright and tries to escape the angry woman. Before Portia reaches the retreating figure, Jason quickly comes over and pulls Portia to her feet.

Jason: Just leave it. Come on, let's go.

Portia: Get off me!

Jason: Portia! Leave it.

Jason pulls his partner away, leaving the terrified Cari on the floor, knocking on Darkstars door.

[JubsFromTheBlock]

Okay Niiiiiiiiiiimf, I thought it was very good.

Thought you had both characters down nicely, really liked the dialogue between them and the indifference of Darkstar made me laugh.

If I'm going to be really picky I felt it could've used a little bit more actual brawl - ALTHOUGH you built towards it brilliantly with the shoving, slaps and growing tension in between so I give big brownie points for that.

Since the final task is to write a match I figure you can move on with this unchanged as we'll see your ability to handle action next

Well done and see you at the next hurdle.

[Nimf]

I felt it was a bit unbrawly too, but struggled a bit with the whole brawl as opposed to actually wrestling ness! Thanks for the feedback, shall try to impress you a bit more next bit!!!

[omegamale]

I was impressed, women don't really brawl, they cat fight so this works for me.

[Nimf]

YAY! So is that me onto the next bit?

[JubsFromTheBlock]

NO!

Haha, I joke, yeah go for it.

Sorry I meant to say that in my first comment...

I think you should have a triple threat exploding ladder match between yourself, Angel and Portia.

Actually, scratch that, instead have a little one-on-one bout facing off against Portia. I think that Portia should win it with some sort of cheating - feel free to run with that however you feel suitable .

I'm looking forward to this !

[Nimf]

So, no pressure then? lol! Should get it up tonight (if I haven't had a nervous breakdown...)