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"E"
Mar 24, 2011 22:56:15 GMT 2
Post by acailler on Mar 24, 2011 22:56:15 GMT 2
Wrestler's Name: E Alias: The Anomaly Height: 6’7" Weight: 396 lbs Entrance Music: The Landing – Nobuo Uematsu Hometown: A far off land that is closer then you think Wrestling Style: Unorthadox, Powerful Profile: Not much is known about “E” other than he was found in an abandoned warehouse as a small child and raised by a mysterious, and seldom seen, powerful group of Sages until the age of 18, when he became to powerful for even those who trained him to control. What he lacks in Moves, he makes up for in pure intimidation. He wears Black Jeans. Nothing more, nothing less. Entrance(s): As the heartbeat at the beginning “The Landing” plays, “E” comes out into a darkened arena. But He does not walk to the ring. He floats to the ring (Ala Undertaker) wearing a black cloak, surrounded by pillars of fire and smoke. As he enters the ring the Arena goes into total darkness. All of a sudden all of the house lights come on and there stands “E”...The Cloak removed, but nowhere in sight. Normal Moves: Hard Punch (Right Hand) Kick to the knee (Right Foot) Clothesline (Right Arm) Open Fisted Punch (Left Hand) Standing Knees to the face Standing Headbutt to the back of the neck Drop Kick Signature Move(s) : “E” Headbutt to the Stomach. Running against the ropes, drops down and dives into the opponents Stomach, headfirst. (Spearesq, but not quite) Spinning suplex kneckbreaker. Finishing Move(s) : “The Black Sage” One Handed Chokeslam style Powerbomb Taunts: Standing Stare...No Movement Known To Dislike: Almost Everything. Has Teamed With: Himself Has Feuded With: Himself Debut: Favourite: Titles Held: Trivia: “The Black Sage” was a move he created himself...this is when the Sages knew he was ready to leave their brotherhood. Alignment: Heel
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"E"
Mar 24, 2011 23:24:31 GMT 2
Post by Darkstar on Mar 24, 2011 23:24:31 GMT 2
Headbut to the knees... hard to make look realistic without actually doing it. But not a big issue. But that finisher... no way dude, that would work in jobber matches or on XTV, but you cant build tension with something like that in a match. You need more of a set up to make it work or you could just have the lights drop at the start of a match. And maybe have a second finisher. A good power based move.
Also 'high flier'? At near 7 feet tall and 400 pounds?! Thats not happening dude. Sure the very occasional high move (a la Takers tope). Also you seem to have made a heel, but made him a face. I dont mind that at all, just be aware that 'dark' faces need a reason to be cheered, most of them started as heels and turned when the crowds took to them.
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"E"
Mar 24, 2011 23:30:00 GMT 2
Post by acailler on Mar 24, 2011 23:30:00 GMT 2
Changed the Finisher. The headbutt to the knees can work, it's just not off the top ropes. The running will give the same momentum! Never said he was a face. He's a scary ass heel
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"E"
Mar 24, 2011 23:32:08 GMT 2
Post by Darkstar on Mar 24, 2011 23:32:08 GMT 2
Last line says hes a face.
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"E"
Mar 24, 2011 23:51:35 GMT 2
Post by Megz on Mar 24, 2011 23:51:35 GMT 2
Could you instead of hitting the knee (which is like the stupidest place to headbutt someone really other than than perhaps their fist) to a diving headbutt to the stomach? Also do you really mean just black jeans? He's barefoot? I can;t see a 6'7 guys doping a pele kick. Yakuza kick or something then yeah. at 6'7 and close to 400 lbs I expect this guy to be picking up just about everyone and chucking them about in suplexes or bomb's etc Also you have put him as face.
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"E"
Mar 24, 2011 23:58:05 GMT 2
Post by Megz on Mar 24, 2011 23:58:05 GMT 2
Could be a cool finisher...
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"E"
Mar 25, 2011 1:18:53 GMT 2
Post by acailler on Mar 25, 2011 1:18:53 GMT 2
Could you instead of hitting the knee (which is like the stupidest place to headbutt someone really other than than perhaps their fist) to a diving headbutt to the stomach? Also do you really mean just black jeans? He's barefoot? I can;t see a 6'7 guys doping a pele kick. Yakuza kick or something then yeah. at 6'7 and close to 400 lbs I expect this guy to be picking up just about everyone and chucking them about in suplexes or bomb's etc Also you have put him as face. Changed to Heel Changed to Stomach headbutt Ok, How cool would it be if the Big Show suddenly pulled out a Pele Kick!! This guy has to have something individual! HE WAS TRAINED BY SAGES!!
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"E"
Mar 25, 2011 10:14:06 GMT 2
Post by Darkstar on Mar 25, 2011 10:14:06 GMT 2
You have to be aware of the limitations of the size you picked. Big guys dont have the agility for a pele kick. A dropkick, just about, but nothign more.
TWOStars is a fed based around as if its a real TV show, so only the sort of things that could happen would go on.
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"E"
Mar 25, 2011 10:15:22 GMT 2
Post by Darkstar on Mar 25, 2011 10:15:22 GMT 2
Oh, and I have no problem with the sages stuff. One thing I have been wondering, you say he floats to the ring. How would that work?
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"E"
Mar 25, 2011 11:10:49 GMT 2
Post by Megz on Mar 25, 2011 11:10:49 GMT 2
I assumed it was the undertakers "layer of fog" type deal...
Just to reiterate what DS said in that we essentially mirror a live broadcast each week, it's very much not an "Roleplay" based fed where you just write stuff about your character so the reason we ask for silly detail is because it has to work as if it was a TV show. So the Sage stuff is fine but having him actually be magic or work in an "unreal" way is not going to work.
Also for the sake of helping the graphics guys can you choose a base image for your guy for posters etc. Please make it a real person not anime or a drawing etc.
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"E"
Mar 25, 2011 12:21:07 GMT 2
Post by JubsFromTheBlock on Mar 25, 2011 12:21:07 GMT 2
Okay, a few different thoughts as I go through it. Apologies if anything comes across as harsh or nasty, it's not intended as such but the written word strips away all emotion . I'm VERY happy you have a strong gimmick - I love a good gimmick and this has a lot of very interesting potential. He's a very, very big guy so, like Darky has already said, the pele is just a no-go. However, replacing it with a dropkick is still impressive; I recommend looking up a video on youtube of Big Show delivering one if you've never seen how amazing it actually looks to see someone his size perform it. How exactly does your finisher work? I'm just having trouble visualising it so please could you explain it step by step cause, right now, it looks really awkward in my head? I think there's potential here, but we've got work to do with it .
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"E"
Mar 25, 2011 12:33:32 GMT 2
Post by Megz on Mar 25, 2011 12:33:32 GMT 2
It's just a one handed version of a chokebomb isn't it? So you'd do a normal style chokeslam and then instead of staying on your feet the choker would sit out slamming the chokee between his legs.
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Mar 25, 2011 12:58:45 GMT 2
Post by Darkstar on Mar 25, 2011 12:58:45 GMT 2
Yeah, like A-Train/Albert used. But one handed. It would be a little difficult for bigger guys to take (6'3 plus) due to the landing so I'd be a little wary there, but we dont have many BIG guys, so its not too much of an issue. Though if he hits this on Tiny he could break his own leg.
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"E"
Mar 25, 2011 13:24:21 GMT 2
Post by Megz on Mar 25, 2011 13:24:21 GMT 2
You think Tiny will even get airborne? :S
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"E"
Mar 25, 2011 14:22:41 GMT 2
Post by Darkstar on Mar 25, 2011 14:22:41 GMT 2
True, it would look like the Hulk Hogan Chokeslam.
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